into night's sweet mystery
time for you and me
to be
covered under pin-pricked light canopy
i see you
drink me in
and i
am all at once
lost
and found
again
*It's finally time for the Opening Celebration over at d'Verse Poet's Pub. Click over to participate or just to see what all the fun is about.
Oh getting a tad steamy today
ReplyDeleteGreat job with the word play
Just make sure you cover up well
Wouldn't what a passerby to see and have show and tell..lol
"drink me in" great line, another fine write!
Aww sweet....Those nice gentle summer nights :)
ReplyDeleteSweet and hot..ha..ha..
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you at D'Verse ~
This is simply beautiful. "...i see you drink me in..." is perfect.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if men realize that women actually do see them drink them in? In the million-mile-an-hour moment, I'll bet not. But it is a moment of secret communication that you have beautifully captured here, Lori. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree, very gentle and perceptive.
ReplyDeleteA lovely write.
This is simply beautiful, Lori - I love it. So romantic and tender. It feels like a moment you don't want to forget.
ReplyDeletethis is like a song lyric for sure..inviting warm...very well spun...someone said that to me i might melt...smiles.
ReplyDeleteLove "drink me in"...Summer Heat!
ReplyDelete☆ Nice!
If you ever get lost again, I will look for you in the Lost and Found!
ReplyDeleteBrought that picture to me too!
ReplyDeleteThanks for telling me about d'verse. For now, I will read...maybe one day I will be brave and share!
ReplyDeleteYou always know about all the cool happenings.
oh nice...a pin pricked canopy...lovely image...i am excited about d'Verse...it is going to be a fun site...bkm
ReplyDeleteAhh.. intimate. Loved it.
ReplyDelete"the sun's blazing rays have faded
ReplyDeleteinto night's sweet mystery"
Another amazingly memorable image Lori. I love the economy and intensity of your writing.
Agree with Monika. Smiles...
ReplyDeletepin pricked light canopy--wonderful image that I wish I'd written. :0) This is quite beautiful, Lori.
ReplyDeletethis is beautiful lori...lost and found again...warm with love
ReplyDeleteAs Claudia said, beautiful.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful and warm evocation of love.
ReplyDeletePerfect for opening night! Looking forward to hearing more from everyone at the pub!
ReplyDeletevery nice, those hot summer nights...
ReplyDeletei see you, drink me in, love that.