Tuesday, July 19, 2011

OpenLinkNight: Lost and Found

the sun's blazing rays have faded
into night's sweet mystery
time for you and me
to be
covered under pin-pricked light canopy
i see you
drink me in
and i
am all at once
lost
and found
again

*It's finally time for the Opening Celebration over at d'Verse Poet's Pub. Click over to participate or just to see what all the fun is about.

22 comments:

  1. Oh getting a tad steamy today
    Great job with the word play
    Just make sure you cover up well
    Wouldn't what a passerby to see and have show and tell..lol

    "drink me in" great line, another fine write!

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  2. Aww sweet....Those nice gentle summer nights :)

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  3. Sweet and hot..ha..ha..

    Great to see you at D'Verse ~

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  4. This is simply beautiful. "...i see you drink me in..." is perfect.

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  5. I wonder if men realize that women actually do see them drink them in? In the million-mile-an-hour moment, I'll bet not. But it is a moment of secret communication that you have beautifully captured here, Lori. Thank you.

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  6. Yes, I agree, very gentle and perceptive.
    A lovely write.

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  7. This is simply beautiful, Lori - I love it. So romantic and tender. It feels like a moment you don't want to forget.

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  8. this is like a song lyric for sure..inviting warm...very well spun...someone said that to me i might melt...smiles.

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  9. Love "drink me in"...Summer Heat!
    ☆ Nice!

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  10. If you ever get lost again, I will look for you in the Lost and Found!

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  11. Thanks for telling me about d'verse. For now, I will read...maybe one day I will be brave and share!

    You always know about all the cool happenings.

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  12. oh nice...a pin pricked canopy...lovely image...i am excited about d'Verse...it is going to be a fun site...bkm

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  13. "the sun's blazing rays have faded
    into night's sweet mystery"
    Another amazingly memorable image Lori. I love the economy and intensity of your writing.

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  14. pin pricked light canopy--wonderful image that I wish I'd written. :0) This is quite beautiful, Lori.

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  15. this is beautiful lori...lost and found again...warm with love

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  16. A beautiful and warm evocation of love.

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  17. Perfect for opening night! Looking forward to hearing more from everyone at the pub!

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  18. very nice, those hot summer nights...
    i see you, drink me in, love that.

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